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高分万能主题升华句15大类
一、人与自然
1.They discovered the wisdom of living in harmony with nature, developing a deep appreciation for the delicate balance between humans and animals.(非谓语现在分词)
他们发现了与自然和谐相处的智慧,对人与动物之间微妙的平衡产生了深刻的理解。
2.Lets cherish the beauty of nature and strive to live in harmony with the environment, for it is our home and our heritage.(for 引导的原因状语从句)
让我们珍惜大自然的美丽,努力与环境和谐相处,因为它是我们的家园和遗产。
3.Their compassion and empathy taught them the invaluable lesson that treating animals with kindness and respect creates a world of love and harmony.(同位语从句)
他们的同情心和同理心教会了他们宝贵的教训,即以善良和尊重的态度对待动物会创造一个爱与和谐的世界。
4.At that moment, happiness and touch mixed, welling up into my heart, tears rolling down my cheeks.Only then did I realize that animals also know how to extend their appreciation.(非谓语 独立主格 倒装句)
那一刻,幸福和感动交织在一起,涌上心头,泪水顺着脸颊滚落。直到那时,我才意识到动物也知道怎样表达它们的感激之情。
二、人与社会
1.Its a memorable moment witnessing a new and meaningful bond in our family.From my fathers words, I have realized that family matters the most in the world.I will treasure/value it with all my heart forever.(非谓语现在分词 宾语从句)
这是一个难忘的时刻,见证了我们家庭新的、有意义的纽带。从我父亲的话中,我意识到了家人才是世界上最重要的。我会永远用心珍惜它。
2.Everyone has one person they look up to as a role model.To me, there is none other than my mom.From my mothers kindness, I have felt the warmth of our family.Without her in my life, I would have no idea whether I can do something.(定语从句 虚拟语气)
每个人都有一个他们崇拜的榜样。对我来说不是别人,正是我妈妈。从我母亲的善良中,我感受到了我们家庭的温暖。如果我的生活中没有她,我将不知道我是否能做某事。
3.With gratitude in their hearts, they realized that the true treasure of a parent-child relationship lay in the moments of connection, creating a lifelong bond that went beyond words.(宾语从句 非谓语现在分词)
内心怀着感激之情,他们意识到父母与孩子关系的真正财富在于联系的时刻,创造出超越言语的终生纽带。
4.The students and the teachers developed an unbreakable bond, where wisdom and inspiration flowed between them, creating a lasting friendship.(定语从句 非谓语现在分词)
学生和老师之间建立了一种智慧和灵感在他们之间流动的,牢不可破的纽带,创造出一种持久的友谊。
三、团结与协作
1.Only by working together can we build a harmonious society where everyone can contribute and thrive.(Only放在句首的倒装 定语从句)
只有共同努力,我们才能建设一个人人都能贡献力量、茁壮成长的和谐社会。
2.From the unforgettable experience, I have realized that this random act of kindness has a great influence on me.If possible, I always give a helping hand to other people.(宾语从句 if possible)
从这次难忘的经历中,我意识到这种随意的善举对我有很大的影响。如果可能的话,我总是向别人伸出援手。
3.Even small acts of love/kindness can make a big difference./ Love/kindness is one thing that really deserves to be passed on from one to another.(定语从句)
即使是小小的爱/善举也会产生很大的影响/爱/善良是一种真正值得从一个人传递给另一个人的东西。
四、勇气与坚持
1.Thanks to the power of perseverance, I understand that I, even an ordinary person, can create wonders.
幸亏坚持的力量,我明白了即使是一个普通人,我也能创造奇迹。
2.It was hard work and determination that made me the master of my own destiny, despite our appearance.(强调句)
不管我们的外表怎样,正是努力和决心让我成为了自己命运的主人。
3.Actually, every individual possesses talent.Be brave when you find it and also make efforts.You can create miracles in the end.
事实上,每个人都有天赋。当你发现它时要勇敢,也要努力。你最终可以创造奇迹。
4.Courage and perseverance are the keys to unlocking our potential.Only by standing firm can we reach our goals.(Only 放句首倒装)
勇气和毅力是释放我们潜力的关键。只有立场坚定,我们才能实现目标。
5.Determination and optimism are what it takes to conquer your fear and accomplish your goal.(what 引导的表语从句)
决心和乐观是克服恐惧和实现目标所必需的。
五、生命与健康
1.Health is our most valuable asset.Lets adopt a healthy lifestyle and cherish our well-being.
健康是我们最宝贵的财富。让我们采取健康的生活方式,珍惜我们的幸福。
2.The accident made them appreciate the fragility of life, prompting them to cherish every moment and treasure meaningful connections.(非谓语现在分词)
这场意外让他们意识到生命的脆弱,促使他们珍惜每一刻,珍惜有意义的联系。
3.The story shows that everyone should have a good knowledge of first aid, for every second will count in an emergency.(for 引导的原因状语从句)
这个故事表明,每个人都应该有良好的急救知识,因为在紧急情况下,每一秒都很重要。
六、家庭与生活 略
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十五、友善与同理心 略
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